Comments:
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Ralph Meijer:
Try to focus on your timing.
Piotr Skulimowski:
Read sth about fundamentals. For example Animators Survival Kit. It helped me a lot.
Cory Parks:
Add some pauses in here, he's too floaty.
Janzelle:
Very floaty
Reginald Crumpler:
A little work on the lip sync, plus the figure's movement seemed to be a bit wavy, not concise. And work on giving your figures more character. Also, set design and background isn't required, but it helps a lot.
Animator: Tasia Srock
Description: I wish I had more time to spend on this, but moving houses doesn't help with any of that. Crits and comments are welcome and greatly appreciated!
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks