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philipp seis:
i like how you illustrate social status in the acting. Partly the animation looks to pose to posy.
Piotr Skulimowski:
There's no point for her to be there. It brings nothing to the story. Witch is completely not clear.
Tobias Fuhr:
i love the employee, but the guy need some adjustments. He didn't move his spine and in the final talk his head is stopped. but i liked, congrats
Austin Hambrick:
this is really good. his arm seems to turn into a stick towards the end when hes holding the cup up hardly moivng in contrast to the rest of the animation when its moving alot.
richard a.:
Was this rendered? If so, it is a bit dark. Good poses. The first half of the animation look good but the second half seems a bit incomplete. Job job overall =)
Ben LaScala:
This is great! Until he moves his arm to sip his tea. Its really breaks his vitality and breaks the illusion of life. Otherwise This is awesome stuff!
Luis Trebino:
I like the idea, but needs some extra work on the animation
Janzelle:
The motion is very smooth and feels comfortable all until he brings the cup up to his mouth. That just felt a bit stiff to me, but the motion in the woman is very nice. Nice lighting too.
Amartya Mukherji:
nice acting. The Don type attitude is clearly coming through but could have been polished a bit more probably. Anyways, I liked it, specially the maid acting is well thought off.
Reginald Crumpler:
Excellent piece! : )
Yurika Nishi-Imai:
This man drinks his tea with SERIOUS style.
Katie Wyman:
I actually feel like the girl in the background was animated the best, but that might just be because her subtle movements were very nice.
Animator: Paula Decanini
Description: This is my attempt at a Godfather-esque scenario of someone being cordial while unmistakably threatening. I'm going for subtle, yet intense. All critiques welcome!
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: Approximately 2 weeks