Comments:
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Emily Spearman:
More inbetweening, less cuts. This doesn't seem fully animated.
ibet francisco:
Actions are not clear.
Reginald Crumpler:
Practice, practice, practice!
Katie Wyman:
Practice is the main thing this needs. The attempt is there and I can see you're really passionate about the animation, but you need more in-betweens in your animation. Practice basic anatomy drawings and follow some animation theory tutorials online
Animator: Alice Stacey
Description: A radio presenter gives an answer over the radio to a listener on good advice.
Welcome to Nightvale was the inspiration.
Experience: This is my first time doing a proper piece of 2D cell animation.
Time taken: 5 weeks