David Barrow:

Daring move to put the most dramatic speakers back to the camera. Not sure it worked.

William Barry Eggington:

Awkward FK stuff on the head. They seem off balance.

Michael Kristiansen:

Not bad. Only comment I have is about the camera in the end. It somehow looks to me as if the old guy slides/scales or the camera zooms. Looks odd to me. I would have picked another angle to emphasize his emotion.

J.K. Riki:

Lol, I like the concept a lot. Nice creativity!

Jo Anne Tan:

Animation is too stiff, but the acting choices are nice. Be careful with neck rotations, especially for the old man. The neck shouldn't be able to rotate like that when the head remains locked in the same angle.