Jed B.:

Careful with so many camera moves. Detracts from the animation.

Sabrina Winkel:

This like totally sums up my video game life! Good job!

William Barry Eggington:

Wowa . . . wacky camera move. weird framing. . . stiff.

David Barrow:

First character is good. Second one seems to be moving his eyebrows a little too much for me.