David Alin:

why is the guy on the right looking so up in the sky? no reason

Bradley Adams:

hands in the same position for too long

Larry Bryant:

I'm not sure what's going on here.

William Barry Eggington:

Hard to tell who is looking at what and why. Is that a slice of pizza?

Jo Anne Tan:

You have good understanding of making character silhouettes clear and strong, but the animation on a whole is very jerky, and the first guy's acting choices are very cliche and overacted. Also not too sure what he was staring at, is that a carrot?