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Hope Floats

by Michael A. Ryfinski

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished 161 out of 223 entries.

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Animator: Michael A. Ryfinski

Description: My animation for the November Competition. Looking for constructive criticism and feedback.

Experience: 5 years student animator

Time taken: Two weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

David Barrow:

Love the way he looks in the stall first. Movements seem a little computery. Needs anticipation, ease in, etc. Also his hand on the plunger around frame 122 is awkward.

William Barry Eggington:

Seems like you have poses that aren't too bad but the motion is quite robotic and un-natural.

Lady Musician:

Movements are very rigid. Work on the fluidity of the transitions between animations. (Love how you used the "ugghh" sound!). Background is plain, too.

Amartya Mukherji:

ha ha ha. Not the best animation but the funniest one for sure.