Comments:
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Bradley Adams:
I think the camera needs reworking to allow you to emphasize certain gestures and phrases, nice lip sync. Try and focus on gestural and body movement to give actions emphasize.
William Barry Eggington:
Seems you have a ways to go to get good clean motion but I can see the fundamentals.
Animator: Bernardo Hdz Blackaller
Description: Luke is being intimidated by the receptionist of the hotel.
Experience: 6 Months
Time taken: Few days