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I like the quick turn. Lip sync is not too shabby. Careful hitting walls... keep it quick in the movements but soft in the landings.
There's a lot of courage and power in this animation! My favorite one i've seen
The lip sync on "I'm not afraid" is a little off.
When the fish-like character sets his cane on the ground (at around frame 67) it shakes a bit as it settles into place. It happens again around frame 147.
I'm not sure if it was on purpose but it looks a little weird since it's only the cane and the end of the fin and I think if you meant to show some sort of shaky hands it would have looked better if it affected the rest of his arm/fin too.
William Barry Eggington:
Not too bad.
Janice Quinteros Wachtendorff:
La voz del monito verde no le viene al personaje que pones.
Jo Anne Tan:
Nice! The lipsync could be stronger, and more subtle changes in the facial animation can make this much richer. But your body mechanics are pretty solid!
Animator: Nassim Briedj
Description: Joe...heuu "LUKE" is asking a green fishboy....heuu sorry "YODA" to train him... May the force be with us!
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 4 days