Brad Bradbury:

? I didnt understand the story..

Aldric:

Really fun idea you had with this dialogue, at first I was as surprised as Malcom to see the statue talking without moving his mouth jaja. I like also how he faints at the end, good job. At the beginning of the shot you have too many camera cuts and movements which I dont really think you need. Also Malcoms left hand is totally stiff, try adding a subtle movement. Also check his lipsynch when he says "Im not afraid".

Friska Bako:

Haha didn't see that coming.

Melissa:

With your camera you are breaking the 180 rule.

William Barry Eggington:

I like the camera move. Fun idea. Could have been cleaned up a little but great work.

Lady Musician:

mouth movements are off. (I really dug the twist, though!). Would have liked to view the video without the debug? screen.

David Barrow:

Nice surprise with the third character popping in.

Michael O'Brien:

First few frames facing the statue aren't necessary. In fact, it 'd be helpful to giving a little more mystery to it. The sweeping shot behind the staue is a bit jarring and I think you could make it a stonger shot by holding the cam still or moving it just a little bit. I assume the star of the shot is the guy talking and I feel distant from him where the cam is now and cut off when he's blocked by the statue. It looks like a nice fist pound he makes on the table but I don't see it happen with the cam sweep.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

Cool someway it loops maybe I will give it a try.