Carolyn Mennecke:

Don't move her around as much once she puts her hands on the table

Yoni Audi:

Nice work!

Shawshaank:

I guess this is unfinished due to the floatiness, but would have been a cool entry if finished

Juuso Kallioinen:

There seems to be a bit too many cuts for such a short time. I would consider leaving the last cut out. On a positive note I'd say you were successful in portraying the characters personalities and making them believeable.

rahul rishikesh:

Camera change is too much distraction. Timing is ok. Need clean up. Ease in ease out, cushions, pose need work. Pose not well balanced. Good attempt!

Hardik:

Her right hand on MORE Edge of table could be nice.

Angela Colvin:

Where are his textures?

Franco Odeny:

i like the way he pulled his head back that was great.