Final Rating: 4.70. Finished 83 out of 266 entries.

382 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ajinkya Tapkir

Description: Any improvements, corrections and suggestions are really welcome. I would like to know where I can improve and what I need to avoid.

Experience: 5 months

Time taken: 3 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Carolyn Mennecke:

Don't move her around as much once she puts her hands on the table

Yoni Audi:

Nice work!


I guess this is unfinished due to the floatiness, but would have been a cool entry if finished

Juuso Kallioinen:

There seems to be a bit too many cuts for such a short time. I would consider leaving the last cut out. On a positive note I'd say you were successful in portraying the characters personalities and making them believeable.

rahul rishikesh:

Camera change is too much distraction. Timing is ok. Need clean up. Ease in ease out, cushions, pose need work. Pose not well balanced. Good attempt!


Her right hand on MORE Edge of table could be nice.

Angela Colvin:

Where are his textures?

Franco Odeny:

i like the way he pulled his head back that was great.