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by Emmanuel G.
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They're using their hands to articulate what they want a bit too much. Also, it switches between the two speaking characters with no reaction from one while the other is speaking
The characters, their personalities and the dynamic between them works well. On the other hand, she seems to be talking to his chest instead of looking at his eyes. I would suggest doing some more drawing fundamentals to be able to pose the characters more next time.
The last hand movement seems unnecessary.I prefer the lady to bend slightly forward..
this has a lovely feeling to it. I love the way she air-teases him with her fingers.
Visual where is she looking @
Animator: Emmanuel G.
Description: Traditional 2D animation done in FlipBook.
Time taken: Roughly 2 - 4 hours a day, 3 days/week, for 3 weeks.