Carolyn Mennecke:

They're using their hands to articulate what they want a bit too much. Also, it switches between the two speaking characters with no reaction from one while the other is speaking

Juuso Kallioinen:

The characters, their personalities and the dynamic between them works well. On the other hand, she seems to be talking to his chest instead of looking at his eyes. I would suggest doing some more drawing fundamentals to be able to pose the characters more next time.

Arun Kumar:

The last hand movement seems unnecessary.I prefer the lady to bend slightly forward..

But....Well Done

John Doree:

this has a lovely feeling to it. I love the way she air-teases him with her fingers.

Franco Odeny:

Visual where is she looking @