David Maguire:

Like the story! The guards outside are a nice touch. You've got too many static poses, though. You've got little anticipations before he changes pose each time which add a little bit of life, but you need to keep the poses alive with a little bit of settling or easing until the next move.

Arun Kumar:

Huh?

Franco Odeny:

Not bad like it, just the "Thinking about it" show facial thought. but good