Comments:
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Vighnesh Prabhu:
lacks inbetweens at places ! Needs a lot of improvement .
Nathaniel Winckler:
Haha! I laughed when the guy fell down. Good timing and spacing in that part. However, the body mechanics overall could use some beefing up.
Ramsey Pierson:
You cut shots too much. Every time you cut your shots with the gray mouse he is in a different position, and it breaks my immersion while watching. Try and limit this animation to at most 3 shots at MOST, and anticipate your shots with actions. Good start!
Rukariro:
When the other mouse falls on his way out the door:
Me: "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!"
I easily laugh at anything. Nice animation! I love how it's so smooth and thorough. Although, I think you should work on the brown mouse's lip movement a bit more. Overall, nice creativity and animation!
Animator: Mark Gallagher
Description: Its like The Odd Couple except with Rats
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 24 Hours Roughly