Rajarshi Pal:

Good

Daniel Heitzman:

I wish this was finished so I could judge it better. I really like what is here. You're poses are really nice. You also put a lot of thought into the characters and their relationship. Your timing isn't to bad either. You need to work on your physics, weight, and polish. Also, work a little bit more on your draftsmanship. Draw more, and frequently, cause I think you have a lot of potential.

Ramsey Pierson:

I like your poses and acting for your characters. Shots could use improvement, but definitely an interesting scene!

Brian W.:

This has a lot going for it. I'd love to see something you can spend more time on.