Keaton Towns:

The lip syncing at the end isn't really working and the hop at the top of "way" feels a little weird. Good job overall though!

Elisabeth Janerka:

The beginning is very nice and feels good, but when "than a long life..." starts he becomes quite floaty and everything starts to move around. It becomes a bit hard to find out what to focus on.

Kareem Ismael:

Some parts are too smooth. And I think the acting choices in some bits are way too exaggerated for the audio.

ben:

Nice work

ben:

The lip syncing was great.

feb:

would have looked much better with proper cam angle & staging