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better have a short life

by valeria

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished 95 out of 130 entries.

406 views including the voting period.


Animator: valeria

Description: A humble seller mouse, realizes that his job is the best decision he could ever made.

Experience: i have no experience, i´m autodidactic

Time taken: 3 weeks 1 hour at day


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jean Lamy:

The first 50 frames, the character doesn't move towards us, he's walking in place, you could've simply scale him coming up (appropriately of course) and then turning. I wish you colored it in fully. It's hard to read the silhouette.

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice setup, but it is almost impossible to see the main character when the background is so dark, plus some of the shots are so short and cuts away too quickly to actually understand what is happening. Fewer cuts who gets to breath a bit more would be great.

Tom Islava:

That's very cute, but I notice the closeup shots are missing a few in-betweens.