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Labib:
still look like robot, need more life
samuel choy:
This is a good start. When going into animation use reference and block out major poses. This will give your animation more texture and will help it look smoother.
Ani A:
If you want to build upon this clip, I would begin by considering why she’s hesitant to sit. It seems like there isn’t a chair for her to sit in, but that seems strange in an office. Maybe she’s nervous, really nervous, about a job interview for example. In the moment of panic, she grabs the trashcan instead of a proper chair. Think about how an outside viewer portrays the story. It may be helpful to even get a friend to watch it over and provide input. Keep it up!
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: She tries to be creative at finding a seat.
Experience: 5 years of school
Time taken: 4 weeks