Comments:
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Marnie Shick:
Try to establish the story WITHIN the audio, rather than before it. Keep going!
samuel choy:
There is a lot of twining going on. Altering the arm position and all would help add more life to the character.
Roxy Haines:
It is a tad jarring to have the characters suddenly stop moving before a cut, but otherwise pretty decent animations!
Animator: Lee Jia Hui
Description: An artist is drawing and the model suddenly got a backache
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 1 month