Comments:
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Kyra Simone:
Some parts get a little stilted. Remember that secondary action and settling with forearms and pigtails!
Tyvan Deming:
I love the environment! Your character's movements also feel natural, except for most of the timing. Most of the time she's moving at a very constant speed and her motions lack purpose, especially in her arms
JJOneechan:
The magnifying technique is really cool! You should focus on the eyes and eyebrows to make them more expressive.
Christine Valenti:
I would add more facial expressions to your character. How do they feel? Does it match the tone of voice and body language? Great work!
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: A girl finds a deadly frog.
Experience: 5 years of school
Time taken: 4 weeks