Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
there's a few nice bits of movement, but the hand holding the wand feels very unnatural, the lipsync is too subtle/lacking, and she never blinks. It's also a bit hard to tell where she's supposed to be looking, or what the scene is
Catherine Lachepelle:
Fun animation, but her right hand is a bit distracting: it has too much movement and the pinky feels a little overextended. But great start!
Darren Evander:
voice doesnt fit animation and the hand keep doing the same poses,hands are known to be very expressive ,so try to experiment the movement of the hand poses.
Margot Menendez:
The eye tracking is off, especially in the latter part of the animation, and her right pinky looks broken. Maybe show a bit more of the scene, and play around more with changes in expression! Don't forget to turn off your HUD, too.
Animator: Oon Ming Chin
Description: This animation is one of my assignments and also my fisrt time to take part in the competition . I'm so glad that I have a chance to do this work with my lecturer, Alvin. Thanks to my lecturer
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 11days