Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
The posing feels natural, but there's a lot of missing overshoot, anticipation, and general movement frames.
Kyra Simone:
Cute scene. That guy leaves the room WAY too fast!
Darren Evander:
weird lypsinc.mouth is closed the whole time.at frame 180-186,the boy left too fast.and he left by sliding which is weird and ruins the believibility of the movement.
David Summerset:
funny concept. keep it up!
Jordana Haggard:
I love these characters! You did a great job of giving them distinct personalities and attitudes. The speaking character's movements in the second shot feel a little robotic, though. I think offsetting some of the limbs and smoothing out the arcs so she doesn't look like she's hitting a wall would help a lot. Great job!
Animator: Camille Souchard
Description: Golden Poison Frog
Experience: Student
Time taken: 1 month