Parisa:

I really like the idea of animation. working more on timing and transition,

Darren Evander:

.clear body language and expression.nice concept too.the critiscm i have is: at the beggining,you should make the person stand still then make the hand gesture.in your shot,she already done the hand gesture,and when she finally move it,it feel weird(the problem at frame 0-40) and sometime the action is too slow.make more spacing so it feels unique.

Ben Zingo:

the movement and posing are pretty strong, I assume it's intentional that her acting is extremely literal for the sake of the 'show'. Her lipsync seems pretty minimal, but also kinda hard to see with how zoomed out the camera is.
One or two blinks while she's talking would be a nice touch

Alvin Ooi:

smooth animation like it

Cristian:

The body movements feel very characterized and are fun to watch, though I feel that the lip-sync needs work.

On top of that, I especially enjoy the staging, lighting, and story

Kyra Simone:

Very dramatic! More uneven timing will help amplify this.

JJOneechan:

Great staging and idea for this competition!