Kyra Simone:

Nice shape consistency. I see a lot of moments in this one where you can dip down more, and add more anticipation to amplify the curiosity of the character, like at 41 and 192.

Darren Evander:

would like more body language with her face.her face doesnt express a lot.

Miles Every:

The staging in this is really well done. However there isn't much emotion in the character or action so there's isn't much to say. I will say that the subtle head movements and where the character is looking is easily discernible even without pupils so good job there