Final Rating: 4.34. Finished 95 out of 149 entries.

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Animator: Juan Solano

Description: Sam pick’s up a frog and starts to pet it.
Rachel tries to explain that the frog is poisonous but Sam is already under the effects of the
poison before she ends her phrase.

Experience: I'm a student

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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Darren Evander:

the animation feels floaty most of the time.and the acting and body language doesnt do too much to elevate the story and personality of the character.the character are just standing and not expressing thmeselves with their hands or expression of their face .the character feel lifeless and dead. remember, animation isnt just moving the body,it is also bringing the characters to live.your movement isnt very believable.i think that is the core of the problem. improve your basics before doing acting shot.andf the fall at the end doesnt feel like it have any impact.

Richard Adams:

I liked your idea and how you executed it. Animation is good in some ways, not quite so good in others. Reference videos of people falling over would help.

Kyra Simone:

Decent framing. These poses need to be more exaggerated and when the face moves, the shoulders, chest, and really everything need to move slightly to make it more natural.