Jennie:

Am I the only one who wanted it to explode at the end?

Anastasia Ackerson:

Perhaps more lip syncing, and slightly improved timing would help- it's good, but there's some issues here and there

Kyra Simone:

Well, these two look like they get along! Make sure to move the whole body together with poses. Some of them get a bit disjointed.

Justin Huffaker:

Very solid story and great drawings! Good overlap and follow through with the fabric and hair. I would mainly work on the lip sync, there seems to be a limited amount of different mouth shapes to represent different syllables, it just kind of opens and closes,. Nice work overall!

Quinn Dickenson:

Lip Sync seemed a bit lazy