Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
the movements all seem very stiff and pose-to-pose. Revisit your fundamentals and focus on anticipation and overshoot, as well as focusing on creating specific moments of emphasis through the acting
Darren Evander:
the last scene doesnt make sense,why does she say bye deadly frog???
Kyra Simone:
Good framing. Try to add more secondary action on the arms and work those clavicle and spine joints.
Devon Diaz:
I think you do a really good job at setting up the shot with the camera movements and cuts but I think the plot of the scene lacked a little bit of explanation as to what happened in the animation. Nice Work!
Animator: Paula Rodríguez Tarrío
Description: The girl in the bed has been poisoned by a golden poison frog.
¡I am waiting for feedback!
Experience: i am studying
Time taken: 60 hours