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Don't Touch the Animals

by Ryan R.

Final Rating: 5.19. Finished 56 out of 149 entries.

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Animator: Ryan R.

Description: Remember kids, don't touch the animals or you will be subjected to painful venoms and poisons!

Now who wants to see a monkey?

Mery Rig from MeryProject.com
Malcom Rig from AnimSchool.com

Experience: 4 Years

Time taken: 2-ish Weeks


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Khoi Vu:

Great clip! I like the first scene with the book; one thing I would watch here is the grip that Mery (I believe that's the rig) has on the book with her left hand. I think the angle is a bit extreme and as a result causes the weird pinching of the mesh. I like the zoom out as well to Malcolm, but I think the paralyzed movements could be a bit more subtle.

Ben Zingo:

All the movement feels very stiff, except the frog jump, which looks like a stock/pre-made animation

Kyra Simone:

Neat detail! Needs more dramatic anticipation for these dramatic poses.


Everything from the staging, shot selection to the lip-sync and body movements, is very impressive. I really did quite enjoy this animation.

The only critique I have is that the story is well done, but generic, and in some frames, I can see Malcolm clip through the floor.

regardless, great job.


I liked it until the very end. I have no idea what happened to the girl.