Anastasia Ackerson:

Parts tend to travel a bit too much, i recommend using key frames to avoid this! Well done!

Justin Huffaker:

Very clever story concept! I would mainly recommend working on the lip sync, some of the mouth shapes are a bit ambiguous and don't match up to the audio, the mouth wobbles a little bit, make sure your character really clearly annunciates the words. Great work overall!

Kyra Simone:

Lovely charactes! There are a lot of drawings going nowhere here... it's better to have more subtle changes of pose over a long stretch than the same one drawn over itself. Clearer roughs will help your cleanup be more consistent.