Darren Evander:

at the beggining,the character just slide,no human slide like that.learn how to do walks cycle.the story doesnt make sense and doesnt fit the context of the voice.the body language and acting choice is also confusing which is not good because it confuses your audience.And who is your character talking to?and your lypsinc is wrong,your mouth 100% of the time is closed.you should open it more to improve your lypsinc.

Kyra Simone:

Good start on expressing the character. I see a lot of model errors like elbow popping and hand clipping. Often-times, if you can't fix it by re-keying, you're going to have to revise that frame-by-frame. Your expressions will come out stronger if you use the spine and clavicles and face to your advantage. The arms are doing all the work right now.