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by Raúl Ciudad
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the drawings and poses are fun, maybe more focus on the actual motion/animation would be good though, adding in some anticipation, overshoot, etc
I like the character design and the angles! However, this is basically an animatic! I would expect a lot more drawings for this to be considered an animation!
grabbing the phone from her pants was a nice touch :) keep it up!
great acting love the phone underwear
nice character! would love to see this finished!
this looks promising , even with so much less, wish i cud see a completed version :D
I like the actions from frame 354 and beyond, but this digs into the realm of creepiness big time.
Would give more than 6 stars if had more inbetweens for sure!!!
Great acting! I love how she forces herself towards the camera at the end! All that's left now are your inbetweens for more fluidity; Great job!
Animator: Raúl Ciudad
Description: Pencil and paper animation.
Edited with Blender and Audacity.
Experience: Started experimenting in 2005 with some times of inactivity.
Time taken: Worked intermittently during the month.