Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
the drawings and poses are fun, maybe more focus on the actual motion/animation would be good though, adding in some anticipation, overshoot, etc
Alyssa P:
I like the character design and the angles! However, this is basically an animatic! I would expect a lot more drawings for this to be considered an animation!
Flora S.:
interesting poses!
david:
grabbing the phone from her pants was a nice touch :) keep it up!
Athallah satya:
great acting love the phone underwear
Alex Maynard:
nice character! would love to see this finished!
Mahesh Waran:
this looks promising , even with so much less, wish i cud see a completed version :D
ro crown:
I like the actions from frame 354 and beyond, but this digs into the realm of creepiness big time.
Would give more than 6 stars if had more inbetweens for sure!!!
Majid:
Great acting! I love how she forces herself towards the camera at the end! All that's left now are your inbetweens for more fluidity; Great job!
Animator: Raúl Ciudad
Description: Pencil and paper animation.
Edited with Blender and Audacity.
Experience: Started experimenting in 2005 with some times of inactivity.
Time taken: Worked intermittently during the month.