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Took me a minute to figure out she was pinned in place, and the angle of the hand holding the phone feels awkward. Some of the lipsync could also use a bit of work "on a land line" bit in particular feels like maybe it's over-animated
The mouth and lips get super wild/jerky at times, where its saying more syllables than the audio says or making weird shapes that don't correlate. However, a lot of the times it's also spot on!
lip sync in "on a a land line" doesn't match for me.
Is it that something fell on the lady ? If so, it could have been a little more elaborated so as to make the context of the scene more clear.
The subtle movement seems good, but visual appeal lacks due to single shot and pose.
Animator: Mathew Payton
Description: Venessa just moved into her new house when some boxes fell on her. She is now trapped and must call her friend for help.
Experience: 2 years of school
Time taken: Off and on for 3 weeks