Alyssa P:

This is well done! You pulled off a lot of the subtle movements that make a character come to life. There are times when there is a bit of jerkiness, but overall it's not too noticeable. I would say to watch the lighting, as it's a bit strange to me (and randomly brightens halfway through), and perhaps play around a bit more with composition. But great work!

Shivaprasad:

I would love to see some polishing in poses and impact in actions