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You could zoom in or focus on the camera on the character. The movement overall seems fluid & nice, though hard to tell if it syncs perfectly with the dialogue
Nice scene, but it's a bit difficult for me to see the movement of the mouth.
Nice work so far! I really like your poses and and character choices, and the overlap and follow-through in the arms is looking really nice; I think it would really add to the animation if you added more of that overlap and follow-through when she sits on the bed (bouncing slightly and overlapping action in the foot) . I would also love to see the facial expressions more clearly, so exaggeration might be more necessary at this camera vantage point. Another pass for the lip sync would also really add to the good timing you already have in the body!
Description: She is explaining her frustrated feelings
Experience: 1 year in industry
Time taken: 40hours