Alyssa P:

The lighting looks great, along with the expressions and body movements! There are moments where Mery gets a bit robotic, but nothing super noticeable. I would try to avoid the twinning of the arms in the first half of the piece. I like how your environment helps to tell the story of a new struggling mother! Excellent scene design there :)

Mathew Payton:

This looks awesome! I think the poses here are really well defined and the expressions on their face are very clear. I noticed that their arms were twinning quite a bit for the first half, so maybe having them differentiate a bit more could help. And I think bringing one or both of their arms into IK for a bit and having them rest it on the table could of gave their hands a little break between gestures. Around frame 187 and at the very end in particular it feels a bit uncomfortable how their arms are hovering. Overall though awesome job!