Ben Zingo:

seems like you spent a lot of time drawing the contours of the face, which is respectable, but if you spent more time actually drawing the face itself, you might have more to show for all your work!

Flora S.:

i really want to see this cleaned up! its great

david:

keep it up. I like where this is going!

Mahesh Waran:

great acting choices tho

Richard Adams:

Would've scored higher if this was more finished. What you have so far is terrific though.