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A Bar Rant
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I would pay extra attention to the mouth shapes your character is making on certain syllables, as sometimes I see teeth where it doesn't make sense, or the character does not look like they're saying the specific dialogue. I like the design of the characters and background, and the body movements!
this is good. But if you want to take it to the next level, I wish you would draw the characters and the set more appealing.
Animator: Jesselyn Callista Canggra
Description: I tried to portray that strangers can bond over the same problem. This is animated using Toon Boom Harmony.
Experience: I'm still learning the basics
Time taken: 3 days