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The Lovelorn

by Chia Jun Hong

Final Rating: 5.05. Finished 77 out of 243 entries.

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Animator: Chia Jun Hong

Description: Love is not greater than days, lovelorn also do so.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 32 Hour

Comments:

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Joshua:

Instead of having the hand stretch out towards the camera when he says 'Right here Right now' have it stretch out towards his right side where you have some empty space.

It'll keep from obstructing his face (even if for a moment), and help the body expression a little more.