Ben Zingo:

Feels like some of the mouth shapes could be bigger, or more emphasis put on certain words. Also maybe a bit of lean-in, or neck movement (again, for emphasis)

Rhys Davey:

Very nice.
The inner eyebrows make quite a leap upwards at the start. Maybe have them already slightly up at the start and also raise the outer brows slightly on 'Even'.
'Right here, right now' isn't reading well.
What I like to do is animate a bigger move on another layer, then adjust the weight to my liking. Same goes for "..whats more real.."