Comments:
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Kalliope Draga Raptis:
I love the way you did the gesture acting, but you also need to practice using facial expressions. Overall, this is pretty good dude!
Caroline:
Great work on this! You have some really nice poses and super solid lip syncing. The overall movement seems fairly life-like and natural., but I think the end is a little too fast. Maybe consider decreasing the amount of poses in the end, I don't think you need a unique pose/action for every word of the dialogue. Great job!
Grace Riley:
I really like how emotive his hands body language is! Towards the end some of his motions feel rushed though, like you’re trying to squeeze in too many hand motions during the line “…than a person trying to help someone they love.” I think just cutting out one of the motions and making sure the rest are really fluid will easily help that!
Ben Zingo:
the posing and general timing is pretty good, but there's a lot of room for polish. Be sure to think about easing, anticipation, overshoot, etc.
and the lean back at the end feels too fast
Animator: Annissa Hor
Description: POV whereby you are having a heart to heart talk to an imaginary dude regarding romance.
Experience: Amateur (still learning)
Time taken: 2 weeks