Francis Espiritu:

I think the story reads clearly and the key poses you have are quite strong! I think being more intentional with holding certain positions and adding more overlap and follow-through as the model transitions from pose to pose can help add a more believable sense of weight to their character. Narratively, I think it would be interesting if there was more visible tension between the two characters. For example, the model seems very self-centered and in their own head. So perhaps it would add more depth to their relationship by having the artist respond to this, maybe in frustration at how they aren't staying still for the figure drawing session.

Leo McMahon:

the ending made me chuckle