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A talk with basketball Star

by Lum Pei Shan

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Animator: Lum Pei Shan

Description: A host interviewing a basketball star who had retired

Experience: student

Time taken: 30hours

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Rhys Davey:

Here are a couple of quick things that I think can help.
Brows are too angry. Lift the inner brow and lower outer. Eyes don't need to be so wide. A small squint could help at times ie. emotional beat - 'this moment is'

Dial way back on the big swoop he does on 'real'

Take out the flourishing hand gesture at around 260. Just go right for the arm rest and then he can put weight on it for the last pose.