Final Rating: 7.54. Finished 7 out of 330 entries.

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Animator: Adam Kagirimana

Description: After losing another fight, Marcus is getting treated by his wife as she tells him about her day.

Experience: 7

Time taken: 2 days

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Maggie Powell:

Hi there! This is really great! I love how natural you're able to animate these characters. Their interactions and movements all feel very believable and look great. Your work is definitely an inspiration for me to get better at 3d animation and practic in the future.

Hakizabera kevin:

amazing.

Sean Durkin:

I love how you made the ugh sound of him in pain. It added a lot to your story. When the left hand moves on the ugh sound, around frame 240, it feels very snappy. You should add some follow through to make it feel more natural.

Leesha Mendoza:

The acting could be much stronger.

Cassidy Crum:

I think that the animation featured here is absolutely amazing. The characters move in a realistic and readable way that conveys their emotions wonderfully. My main suggestion would be to add either background or foreground elements to help make the scene clearer. I still am not sure what the character's are doing, but I believe the character on the left is stitching up a wound upon multiple watches.

Lucas Reyes:

I love the story here! You really pushed the bounds in a narrative sense based on the audio that was given. The animation itself is also very well done! Its smooth and the lip sync is spot on.The acting choices are strong, but the one critique I have for them is Voice 1's reaction to hurting Voice 2. She keeps the same expression and just kind of ignores the scenario in front of her. Other than that, awesome work!