Christopher Reig:

I liked the environment, but if it is going to be rendered check the materials first so that the audience doesn't see that the character is in an empty room with no one else in it. I would also recommend animating the root controller more, even if the hips would have been out of frame it is important to include that motion to make it feel natural. I would also reduce the amount of swaying back and forth on the spine as it is very disorienting.