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Juan Luna:
Love the addition of the fire at the end! I would say a lot of your motion is sort of waiting to happen in a sequential order. However, more fluid animation would have each motion overlapping each other rather than happening one by one. Keep it up!
Animator: Nadine
Description: girl is talking on the phone saying she never burns anything but then her house goes on fire
Experience: none, first time
Time taken: 1 week on and off