Chloe Douzable:

Awesome animation! I love the anticipation and follow-through on the hair. the facial expressions are super animated and I think the constant movement of the hands and body while just performing dialogue is super cartoony and fluid. The only things I would suggest are animating the hands more asymmetrically as I can see some almost obvious twinning towards the end. I would also love to understand the story behind this animation (although I know it wasn't required) I think having a story would diversify your entry from everyone else.

Connor Pilot:

This looks really great! I find your arcs and facial posing to be especially appealing. If I had to nitpick, I'd say I would have probably played around with acting choices a little bit more. When she says, "I... I..." and shrinks/closes off a little, I would have her facing away from the off-screen character in some way. This could be as simple as her looking towards the left for a little with her eyes/head or as complex as her rotating her entire upper body that way. I would also watch the action line when the character whispers, as it seems like she would fall over in the pose she is in. Otherwise great work!!