Comments:
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Destiny Nieves:
You did a great job developing the environment in your animation. I also think the emotions expressed in your animation are strong. I recommend adding more fluid motion to the arms of both characters. I also recommend placing the second character closer to the middle of the composition since they are the subject of interest in that scene. Since the kitchen shot has a lot of detail in the staging I think it would be nice to see some background detail in the shot with the second character. Overall, well done!
Joana Rodrigues:
some parts are cracking - the animation isn't fluid. the lip sync need improvement. study staging, the characters are pulled to far to the right
Animator: Manuela Mejia Gomez
Description: A baking girl tells her new friend how she burned her muffins.
Experience: this year
Time taken: the whole month