Richard Clark:

What's going on with the big guy's undershirt? That shiny shader is distracting. It's a strange choice considering almost everything else (minus his hair) has a matt finish. Also, did you shoot reference? I recommend you try learning the basic fundamentals of animation before competing. Master the bouncing ball exercise then move beyond that from there.

David S. Rodriguez:

I think the Sheriff waits too long when Ray places both hands before the officer reacts negatively as I assume the Sheriff would react immediately once Ray touched it for only a second. Still, the animation is great.

Shura:

Why boss so realistic. Fat like mine.