Richard Clark:

I would recommend shooting reference before sitting down to try and animate. This lacks so much of the principles of animation. Maybe instead, learn the basics first before competing.

Sam Hughes:

Good choice of actions towards the end. The comedy of "Not being paid to eat.." comes across well.
Try to keep those eyebrows at the beginning more stable- the eyebrows tend to stay furrowed when angry. The same goes for the ending.
The timing of "college try" should be more sudden and match the impact noise.

David S. Rodriguez:

Wow, not an ending that I expected. Violet Norman choking Red Norman, that is different but somehow works. Superb job!