Richard Clark:

I appreciate the hand drawn effort here. However, the story you decided on is a bit strange. What exactly is the inmate supposed to "handle?" And it looks like the idea was taken straight from Silence of the Lambs.

Sam Hughes:

Try pulling up a reference sheet for the mouth formations, as the tongue doesn't appear in most shapes.
In the 155 scene, try giving the idle character a small animation to give it life, as a perfectly still image removes all life from a character.
Good movement on the last shot, very fluid.

David S. Rodriguez:

Paying homage to the film, The Silence of the Lambs, and I like it very much! The only issue is that the characters are only outlines with no color. It could be stronger if there was color as the background/environment is complete. Still, this is a superb animation!